I don't know when you knocked on my window
When i was caught up in a dream the background of blackish indigo.
You didn't ask, but now that i see, you didn't have to.
With your infinite words
you unlocked my heart and allowed it to escape when you detached the cords.
Because of you my emotions fly freely
As if my words were ever-lasting ink that never before had shown completly.
You came to me wen i was depressed
and you cured my routine of being in distress.
Because of you i know my mistakes
and you made me realize what it takes
You gave me comfort and relief because you wanted to.
Not because of me or anyone else,but because of you and only you.
I was in search of what i wanted to be
And thought i would no furthermore be insight of the true me.
With your deed
you grew a seed.
A seed that that no longer hid the key
that destined me to see my reality.
Sadly you wouln't believe how it hurt so badly.
So for the lesson you taught me i would always say thank you
Because i can lie to myself but not the pen in my hand.
So i know that to you i can stay true
Because of you
Dalisbeth
Finally,
ReplyDeleteYou made a poem and a great one too. But this poem sounds like it was made for one person you mention in the poem. Overall, it is very crafty poem but you have a long way to go
ryan what do you mean finally? (lol). this poem wasn't for a peron it was a thing, poetry. as for all my other poems they are all drafts,not even revised but i really appreciate your help and will take your thoughts into consideration.
ReplyDeleteAYOOOOOOO!!
ReplyDeleteits aight for you to write it...
nah im just kiddin'.
THAT WAS TRULIO KOOLIO FOR...REALIOO.
nah but finally u came out your shell.
it was how do you say....ummm.....
oh yeah...ummmm...im playin',
it was kooooool.
this is a nice peom. it s very emotional and it is real deep. good job dalisbeth.
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